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[โ€“] buddascrayon 4 points 4 months ago (1 children)

The last panel should be the second and third panels and the second and third panel should be 4th and maybe a fifth. I don't even know if that's necessary but you get the picture. It should be a bit of a "oh yeah okay, that's why" when you look at the person who's on the switch.

The way things are ordered now when you get the last panel it's more like a "hurr durr, I guess capitalism suck" than a "of course it's fucking capitalism!!"

[โ€“] [email protected] 6 points 4 months ago

Yeah the punchline is basically already in panel 2