Oh, man... sorry it's coming off like that. Since it's called the Humorless Toaster, the main inspiration is Ron Swanson. At least that's what I was going for...

[–] JASN_DE 42 points 2 months ago (1 children)

Ah. I think the moustache needs to be wider for that. Also, a label might be in order. Ron Toasterson or something.

[–] bassomitron 22 points 2 months ago* (last edited 2 months ago) (2 children)

Agreed, wider and thicker with maybe a wavy/ ridge texture on the bottom half of the mustache and slight rounding/flaring on the sides that narrows to the top.

https://pbs.twimg.com/profile_images/1262480275/ron-swanson-250fp011911_400x400.jpg

Feels like that's a good reference pic for OP.

Edit:

But I do prefer #2 more. Like others have said, it's simpler and easier to tell the expression.

[–] Road_Warrior_10 6 points 2 months ago (2 children)

It's the perfect pic, thank you. I admit I was working from memory

[–] taiyang 4 points 2 months ago

Mix the two and use a trapezoidal shape for the mouth, perhaps?

[–] [email protected] 1 points 2 months ago

Keep the stasch and call the character "Der humorlose Toaster".

[–] JigglySackles 1 points 2 months ago

I want to start a fanfic rumor that Ron is related to Ricky from Trailer Park Boys. Lol

[–] [email protected] 20 points 2 months ago

Yeah you got the mustache in that realm. I don't think it was intentional, but Hitler really did ruin the shortened mustache look.

[–] [email protected] 15 points 2 months ago* (last edited 2 months ago)

Have you tried a design where it has a mustache for a mouth? As another lemming described, wider and wavy at the bottom. And then it can move up and down when it talks?

Edit: quick and dirty mockup. This would be my vote

[–] SassyRamen 9 points 2 months ago

Just slap on a brown cutout mustache