Cool photo. Cropping it ever so slightly to completely remove the person on the left would help focus the composition. The blue, pink and yellow lights are really interesting Emphasizing the lights by adding a gaussian blur filter could help bring a glowing luminosity to the lights and make the photo more captivating. I would be curious to see how increasing the blacks and shadows effect the photo - might give it more of a mood. It might also be nice to try turning down saturation and turn luminosity up.
this post was submitted on 05 Jul 2023
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Thanks for the tips, I'll give them a try!
I would try bringing down the exposure and doing something with all the different light sources. Might be too bright to do anything cool with it, but worth a shot!