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[โ€“] [email protected] 2 points 10 months ago (1 children)

No worries, I think that Magpie is generally very well-balanced and has a healthy level of power that can compete with Bear Totem. The only thing in Magpie that I would change is the Terror Display- the rest is all good in its' current iteration.

Undying's defence for it being like that is perfectly sensible, don't worry. But the problem is that the original features may well be genuinely unsalvageable (or at least, fixing them would leave them unrecognisible). There's a good reason Undead looks so different after all lol.

No problem, we homebrewers have to stick together~

[โ€“] Aielman15 1 points 10 months ago

I've updated the document! Undying now has a slow start, but picks up steam by level 10. With all the features combined, the undying should really become what the name suggests.