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[–] drofenvy 2 points 1 year ago* (last edited 1 year ago) (1 children)

I wouldn't beat yourself up too much though. The drawings do look good, and they look like they are painting a story, especially the second you posted.

You'll want more examples and studies to get better emotion out of the characters. It's amazing all of the body movements that happen when strong emotion is present that you may not notice without careful observation of similar studies.

Sometimes, the comic book style will be less detailed, like yours, to speed up panel draw time. You see this commonly on web comics for example. Not everything needs to be an anatomy figure book level of drawing

[–] yokonzo 1 points 1 year ago

I know, and thank you. in fact I think I may suffer a bit from that lol I have a background in animation and it's certainly an art form that favors simple drawings and exaggerated movements. The latest one I've been working on has been the past 7 months of my life so lots of influence there