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Thanks a lot for the kind words!
Indomitable is actually referenced in the original Banneret feature (Bulwark), but it has such a contrived trigger requirement (you and an ally both failing the same mental saving throw) that you'll rarely if ever use it outside of white room scenarios. I just replaced it with giving inspiration, which fits the theme of a charismatic commander inspiring the troops, as well as having a much broader use in the actual game.
What's your Commander class? I checked your post history but I can only see your barbarian subclass.
Late response. Reason I haven't posted it is because I've been reworking parts of it I dislike, especially Rally and the subclasses, but there's an older version of it on the internets. I'm definitely keeping the directives though
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