this post was submitted on 14 Jun 2023
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[–] dsigned 2 points 1 year ago (1 children)

There are so many great elements in the photo. From the color to the movement in the water and also the stillness of the dragonflies.

I agree with yenahmik on the cropping. I’ve done a different cropping solution that keeps the movement in the water and also guides the eye around the photo (compositional/visual flow). I think moving the dragonflies off to the side and utilizing their verticality as a reference to the edge of the frame gives the photo more drama or tension. I also added a little more black and contrast to improve the depth of field.

[–] dsigned 2 points 1 year ago

Oops! Forgot to add my version: