A doorway opens
in the charred remains of home
through which new worlds wait
Canon EOS 5d mark ii Ef l100mm f/2.8L macro ISO 400 f/13 1/100
this post was submitted on 20 Jul 2023
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Background draws too much attention from the barely there remains. I like and appreciate the idea and thought behind the photo, but it's too busy. Open the aperture up and blow out the background some.
Thanks for the input! I do like the busyness, but agree that the remains could definitely stand out a bit more. Tweaked the levels to try and strike a better balance.
I prefer the first one that you posted. Interesting figure/ground reversal.