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Image 1
Panel 1
(Ayzee is crouching near the fallen rocks. We see Luz and Amity's feet as they run towards her)
Luz (off-panel: Ayzee! Are you hurt? Are you-
Panel 2
Ayzee (yelling): Enough already!
Panel 3
(Luz and Amity stop, startled)
Ayzee (off-panel): I'm not a baby!
Panel 4
(Milan rushes in through the doors to the gym. She has a large tank on her back filled with yellow elixir)
Milan: Mrs. Noceda-Blights! I got the elixirs-
Panel 5
(Milan pauses and looks around)
Image 2
Panel 1
(Wide shot of Ayzee on one side with Luz & Amity on the other in the Grom arena. Milan is barely visible on the upper level looking down)
Ayzee: And don't say it's fine if I lose!
I don't need to be constantly patted on the back for trying and failing.
Panel 2
Ayzee (angrily): I'm tired of living under the shadow of two legends.
I will achieve something...
Panel 3
(Luz and Amity still waiting)
Ayzee (off-panel): Something even my parents couldn't have dreamed of!
Panel 4
(Luz claps happily, while Amity looks askance at her)
Luz: Well, that is very ambitious!
Image 3
Panel 1
(Ayzee is startled)
Luz (off-panel): You go, girl!
Panel 2
Ayzee (screaming in frustration): Stop messing with my head!
Panel 3
(Close-up on Ayzee's waist, where she is pulling out a slingshot)
Ayzee: Alright.
Panel 4
Ayzee (determined): Let's finish this-
Panel 5
(Ayzee sees the slingshot string is broken)
Panel 6
Ayzee (head lowered): Ugh!!!
Panel 7
Ayzee (dropping to her knees): But why is it so difficult?!
Image 4
Panel 1
(Luz and Amity are watching. Luz has a sad expression and is reaching one arm out)
Ayzee (mostly off-panel): I just...can't do anything right.
Panel 2
Ayzee (eyes squeezed shut): It would be much easier if my magic wasn't taken away.
Panel 3
(Luz looks stricken)
Panel 4
Luz: Ayzee, I-
Panel 5
Amity (interrupting): This is not the best time, Ayzee. Let's talk once we get home.
Panel 6
Ayzee (rising to her feet): No, you can't trick me.
Image 5
Panel 1
(Ayzee is holding an ice glyph paper with a resolute expression on her face)
Ayzee: I'm not going home before I defeat you, Grom!
Panel 2
(Luz has a confused face and Amity has a startled expression)
Luz: ...Grom?
Panel 3
(Milan freezes in alarm)
Panel 4
(Luz holds out a hand, palm up, as Ayzee is rushing at them)
Luz: Wait, we are not-
Panel 5
Ayzee (attacking): Diiiie!
Panel 6
(Ayzee pauses and looks up)
Panel 7
(Milan is shaking her hand back and forth by her neck in a "cut it out" motion)
Panel 8
Milan (pointing to the side): Grooom.
Image 5
Panel 1
(Luz and Amity are standing on the left side of the frame, out of focus. Grom, frozen in ice, is on the right)
Panel 2
(Same frame, but Luz and Amity are now in focus, and Grom is out of focus)
Panel 3
(Ayzee looks to her right)
Panel 4
(Ayzee looks to her left)
Panel 5
(Ayzee eyes widen in shock)
Panel 5
(Ayzee is frozen in place)
Luz/Amity (off-panel): Ayzee?
Panel 6
(Ayzee scoots backward)
Luz/Amity (off-panel): Ayzee, come back.
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