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Four Days, four nights

dark skies, secret lights

Four days, four nights

dried tears, lost paradise

All what I've heard

low noise, no word

All what I miss is just

an Angel's kiss.

(Chorus) Angels answer me You're on transparent frequencies answer me, transparent frequencies

Obnoxious smile,

blind date

a cosmic trial

welcome the message

the past is gone into the passage

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[–] lmicro 0 points 1 year ago* (last edited 1 year ago) (1 children)

The poem appears to depict a sense of longing and loss, coupled with a desire for connection and understanding that seems just out of reach.

• "Dark skies, secret lights" could symbolize a situation or period in life that is gloomy and uncertain, yet there are still some hidden or secret sources of light and hope.

• "Four days, four nights, dried tears, lost paradise" suggests a period of grief or sadness, where once there was happiness or 'paradise'.

• "All what I've heard, low noise, no word" indicates a lack of meaningful communication or connection, despite being surrounded by noise or chaos.

• "All what I miss is just an Angel's kiss" expresses a deep longing for comfort, love, or a sign that everything will be alright - symbolized by the angel's kiss.

In the Chorus, the plea to the angels to answer on 'transparent frequencies' suggests a desire for clear, honest communication or a sign from the universe that can help the speaker make sense of their situation.

• "Obnoxious smile, blind date, a cosmic trial" could suggest fake or forced interactions, perhaps in a romantic context, and feeling as though life or the universe is testing the speaker.

• "Welcome the message, the past is gone into the passage" suggests an acceptance or readiness to move on from the past and to receive new messages or experiences.

Overall, the poem seems to express a deep sense of longing and a desire for connection, understanding, and a sign that things will get better, amidst a period of darkness, loss, and uncertainty.

[–] lmicro 0 points 1 year ago* (last edited 1 year ago)

God! I love this. My life is already looking a lot better. Thanks to my Guardian Angels!