This is genuinely the coolest warlock subclass I've laid eyes on.
I havent played 5e in over a year and Im out here setting up a campaign just to run this patron
No real feedback, just wanting to say thanks for putting this out (into the void haha).
this post was submitted on 07 Jul 2023
9 points (100.0% liked)
DnD Homebrew
601 readers
2 users here now
A community to share and workshop your DnD homebrew. Feats, classes, subclasses, races, items, pretty much everything is welcome.
/c/DnD Network Communities
- Dungeons and Dragons
- Dungeons and Dragons - Art
- DM Academy
- Dungeons and Dragons - Memes and Comics
- Dungeons and Dragons - AI
- Dungeons and Dragons - Looking for Group
Rules (Subject to Change)
- Be a Decent Human Being
- No non-DnD content (any DnD system is fine)
- Credit all content that you did not create (art, etc.)
- No Piracy, this includes links to torrent sites, hosted content, streaming content, etc. Please see this post for details
- Zero tolerance for Racism/Sexism/Ableism/etc.
- No NSFW content
- Abide by the rules of lemmy.world
Posting Homebrew
- If possible, provide a screenshot with your post
- Provide a link to a PDF, Homebrewery, etc.
- Specify in the text whether you're looking for feedback and what kind
- If you ask for feedback, be prepared for criticism. Your first brews might not be as good as you think they are. Brewing is a skill that improves with practice, and you probably won't master it on your first try. That's okay! Try not to take it personally and use it to improve your brewing skills.
Offering Feedback
- Be constructive. "This is bad and you should feel bad" is not constructive. "You have an interesting idea, but it seems unfinished" is constructive.
- If you're critiquing something, offer suggestions or a general direction when possible.
founded 1 year ago
MODERATORS
Thanks, that's high praise! I try to create stuff that is both mechanically and conceptually appealing. Glad you like it!
I'll have to check out your other stuff then! Maybe have an Owen-based party 😎
This one seems like it needs some balance.
Abrogate object makes you an instant expert locksmith. Just touch the door and fwoop you can pass. Going up to large objects is going to be a nightmare to create a campaign experience around. Find a brick wall? A number of uses equal to your proficiency bonus means you'll be able to remove a bunch of blocks, then knock the wall out.
Void existence makes you an ultra powerful resurrector. On the verge of a TPK? Touch the enemy and insta uno-reverse. Combine this with suppressed presence and incorporeal body and you can pretty much guarantee access to the killer.
Incorporeal body/spirit are neat mechanics though.
Thanks for your feedback!
I anticipated the usage on locks, and I'm not particularly concerned--proficiency in thieves' tools or a decent strength score will open locks almost as easily. I'll consider changing usage to once per short rest though, that would reduce use cases like dismantling a wall.
Void existence only works if it actually kills the creature, and only brings back people that particular creature killed in the last minute. So it would be closer to a mass revivify combined with Discintegrate. Seemed pretty situational to me, but I'll consider reworking it.
Thanks again!