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[–] [email protected] 1 points 5 months ago (1 children)

No, I don't think so. "Would you like a sandwich? ... The murderer eats his sandwich" implies the narrator gives him a sandwich. Cheese and ham is a common sandwich.

[–] [email protected] 2 points 5 months ago

Nah ham is the flesh of someone else