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[–] Anticorp 5 points 10 months ago (3 children)

A few too many commas in that line. Eh?

[–] CoggyMcFee 4 points 10 months ago* (last edited 10 months ago)

I mean you could put dashes on either side of “all of them” potentially instead of commas, but commas also work, especially in more poetic prose. Where would you straight-up remove a comma from the line?

[–] [email protected] 1 points 10 months ago

No, that's normal. Might look strange for a native english speaker, but it definitely normal in othet languages.

[–] lewdian69 1 points 10 months ago

Could use one more between "Sauron" and "and"