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Not really sure if you're have had any more 'control' over colours with any other camera - why do you think that's an issue?
What I really like is the angle you've taken it from and the softness that's coming from the trees in the centre - that haziness for want of a better word.
It's a very pleasing photograph, my only critique might be that the area of sunlight seems slightly blown out - so I might have been inclined to under expose it by say a third of a stop - of course that wouldn't help you with your desire not to have the shadows look like - erm, shadows?
Good photo, enjoyed looking at it, thanks for sharing, keep it up, ~~shoot raw~~.
Edit - missed the fact it can't shoot raw
I think youre right, in my mind i was wanting for less contrast in my photo but in reality i Think if i let the shadows be shadows, the highlights be highlights, and everything in between in their right place i can visualize a scene better. I just checked my exif and I shot this at -0.67ev
Considering the fact the trees are dark and the grass and building bright, this was probably a candidate for hdr. Chances may have been slight to capture the full dynamic range.
That being said, it's still a good composition and a good shot. I'd be very interested to see what outcome you have if you re-shoot and take your exposure reading from the green of the grass - I've read that grass is middle grey.
It might, just might eliminate the blown highlights - but don't take my word for it as I'm often told I'm wrong.