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I think I did well with the musicality of the rhythm here although I haven't written a formally structured poem in a while and that'll be what I write next.

Would love feedback on this!

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[–] [email protected] 3 points 2 weeks ago

The third stanza is mg favourite, the rest needs some serious cleaning up.