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Every pub needs a vision statement (awful.systems)

submitted 1 month ago by [email protected] to c/[email protected]

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[–] Crashumbc 3 points 1 month ago (1 children)

While this is writing, it's not formal, it's a marketing ad directed less than savvy want to be entrepreneurs... It's meant to be sales speech.

[–] [email protected] 0 points 1 month ago (1 children)

Right, and a sales speech should be somewhat formal. It's not like an essay or legal appeal, but it should be a lot more formal than a discussion at a backyard BBQ or whatever.

[–] [email protected] 1 points 1 month ago

I don't know. I think it gets the point that the writer is a marketing or sales idiot across quite clearly if the grammar is bad too.