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thank you :) what does it mean for it to scan well? I'm a total noob to poetry, I just figured it would be a good way to get this stuff out of my head so I can try to relax

I really appreciate your analysis! I didn't have any specific moral-of-the-story in mind when writing this, but I can definitely see how you could take it as a warning. I wrote this groggy as shit with the nightmare still in my head so your interpretation is as good as mine haha. Maybe it is a warning from my subconscious or something like that. I am constantly having these nightmares about loneliness, co-dependence, sacrifice, etc and I thought writing about it would help me process it. Time will tell

thanks, this is my first jab at writing a poem, glad you liked it. honestly I kinda regret producing something so jaded and angry but yknow I wrote it and posted it so it's kinda a done deal

this is about spiritual vore not physical vore