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An exercise in atmosphere: Orbit (natebquill.com)

submitted 1 month ago by Broken_Orange_Juice to c/keepwriting

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I wrote this as an exercise in creating a specific atmosphere, focusing on sentence length and structure. I found this interesting excerpt discussing "writing music" from Gary Provost, and thought I'd give it a try.

What sort of atmosphere/vibe do you get from this story? Let me know to help me improve my writing! All feedback is appreciated.

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[–] [email protected] 2 points 1 month ago* (last edited 1 month ago)

Confinement, isolation and insanity, being held at bay by an animalistic survival instinct.

What were you looking for specifically?

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