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In a world where emotions can be physically transferred from one person to another, a black-market dealer discovers a secret emotion that has the power to change the course of humanity. (kbin.social)
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In a world where emotions can be physically transferred from one person to another, a black-market dealer discovers a secret emotion that has the power to change the course of humanity.

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[โ€“] [email protected] 0 points 1 year ago (1 children)

Man. This is really good. Definitely reads like a first draft, but I'm not gonna critique you for that. The concept is great and the execution is almost there. This was a good read and a good idea. Thanks.

[โ€“] [email protected] 1 points 1 year ago

Thank you for the kind words! It's true that editing is the better form of writing lol, next time I'll remember that before posting. I'm glad you enjoyed it!