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Poetry

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A community to celebrate published and OC works of poetry.


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Guidelines & Community Rules

In addition to the general rules of lemmy.world:

Published Poetry

1a: Poetry posts should include the title and the author, when the author is known.

O.C. Poetry

2a: Sharing original poetry is encouraged, but it must be preceded by the tag "[OC]."

2b: If an [OC] post is requesting feedback, it should also follow with the "[FB]" tag. It would look like the following example:
[OC] [FB] Nothing Gold Can Stay

Feedback

All feedback should be given in good faith.

3a: All [FB] requests should be met with comments constructive in nature. It is okay to dislike parts of a poem, but make sure to explain why you feel that way.

3b: Feedback does not need to be extraordinary in nature. Simply expressing how a work makes you feel is often enough.

3c: Use the honor system. When you receive good feedback, return it in kind to another author. Everyone appreciates knowing their work is being read and appreciated.

As this community develops, these guidelines may be adjusted.


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UPDATE:
Some methods of access do not format markdown correctly. I am currently testing various apps and web interfaces to see what does and does not retain formatting.

In the interim, it is encouraged to post text poetry as you normally would, but to include a link at the beginning or end of the post with access to a website or image that retains the formatting as intended.


Other Poetry Communities
Poetry lovers unite! In the style of the fediverse, multiple poetry communities have arisen, and will continue to rise. I will try to keep a list here of communities across instances that are worth checking out!


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lovely Karisma Price poem (www.poetryfoundation.org)
submitted 1 year ago* (last edited 1 year ago) by [email protected] to c/poetry
 

My Phone Autocorrects “Nigga” to “Night”

My nights

play cousin to

their mothers’ favorite

kettles. My nights won’t consume

their reflections so they pour milk

in their coffee. My nights never rest

so they sing their shadows to sleep. Sometimes

they don’t remember any words. My nights have frogs

stuck in their throats, no light soul, every bit of pain, my nights

all Louis Armstrong minus a trumpet, and my nights play chicken

with the train. My nights both shoe and polish. Both Sambo and Bruce

Leroy. We all little pretty medallions on our grandmothers’ nightstands. My nights

are mistaken for other nights that bear no resemblance. I saw the sinew of the oldest night

in the neighborhood on the floor, his saint pendant

missing. All the small, down-feathered nights

scatter from the groan of pig sirens. My nights don’t know their history. My nights are pecans without

the trees that grow them. My nights instruct all the people in their head to weep. My nights hate the firefly

cutting their darkness. My night, did you see them? They just walked right past us and didn’t even speak. My nights are ordinary,

wear ruffled socks, have the best belts. My nights don’t always go to church but my nights are lambs worthy of the morning. My nights are revised constitutions, crypt keepers, my nights are a congregation

of alligators on a rumpus bayou. My nights hiss into themselves. No one hears. Their blood

rolls its eyes. My nights chew gum and sunflower seeds. My nights eat pork. My nights

get the itis and slur their speech. My nights protest protests. The government watches. My nights live in Brazil

Botswana the Congo Cuba the D.R. France Grenada Greece Honduras Ireland Liberia Lithuania Nigeria Venezuela

Zimbabwe. My nights live in America to remind you of me. Some

people think my nights are better with their eyes closed but

my nights have beautiful corneas. My nights wash clothes

that don’t belong to them and won’t look their bosses

in the eye. My nights know necessity. My nights

oblige. When my nights die, I wash them on

my kitchen table. After my nights are

washed, I throw away the table.

My nights have names. My

nights smell of sage.

My nights smell

of the muddy

rivers they

will never

swim in

again.

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[–] [email protected] 2 points 1 year ago (1 children)

This has got to be one of my favorite poems of all time. I'm a southern expat and this reminds me of where I am from.

[–] Scaldart 1 points 1 year ago

It's a wonderful existential piece about an experience I can never truly understand, but it does a wonderful job of conveying the gravity of that surrealism nonetheless.