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Oooh, the Blue Core Trilogy. So much potential on that one. With some tightening of plot and more character depth it could very well have been Great instead of merely Good.
Yeh, I don't think he did any additional editing when turning them into ebooks unfortunately. Some of the pacing could have done with some work.
What characters did you want more depth with?