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No offense, brother, but this is a great example of my swear-by.
Don't write a "wall of text." Even if a reader is interested, it's hard to read the whole thing.
Separate your wall into smaller sections, use bullet points (esp at work) if it helps.
Use small sentences. Forget what they told you about keeping similar ideas in one paragraph. You're not Salinger, and no one is expecting you to be.
This is a digital age, and our job as not-salinger is to convey information.
No offense taken
These are salient points
I edited my post
I hope it's easier to digest now
Thank you for the constructive criticism