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Recommendation: I’m Sippin Tea in yo Hood (self.hpfanfiction)

submitted 2 months ago by jlem to c/hpfanfiction

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This is SO GOOD and hilarious. Harry, Tom, Albus, Grindelwald, and the marauders are trapped in a Fae realm. They’ve time travelled from when they’re each in the 16-18 range. So in their respective universes - Harry has defeated LV, Tom has 1 Horcrux, Ariana is still alive, and the marauders are 5th years. Or maybe 6th.

Anyway it’s amazing and laugh out loud funny and you should read it. Cracked treated seriously.

http://archiveofourown.org/works/39323223

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[–] [email protected] 1 points 2 months ago

Interesting premise, if slightly confusing. Not sure what a "Fae realm" is. I'm only a couple chapters in, but there were a few things which irked me.

It feels a bit too American. For example, Harry would likely say 'torch', not 'flashilght'.
There were a couple muggle terms (like holster and radar) which seemed out of place. In particular, radar would have been a fairly recent (and secret) invention in Tom's timeline, so it seems odd that he would know about it and have an equivalent spell for it.
The historical characters sometimes speak too candidly for their timeframe. For example, "maybe we swing around to the dorms, make out in your old bed" doesn't seem like language someone from 1899 would use.

In any case, thanks for sharing! I might read the rest of it at some point.