Omg right? A lot of times it happens when I'm literally asleep and my leg just decides to rip itself apart for no reason
Duchess
joined 2 years ago
it's definitely different to get the balancing act right. i think another way you could approach this is to play more into the emotions. the times i've been in extreme emotional distress i've completely shut down, not eaten or cleaned myself, and i think drawing on experiences like that could be a way to enhance the story also.
i'll stand by the fact that one of my favourite books of all time is the phantom tollbooth. the best children's content is something that can also be enjoyed by adults.