this post was submitted on 03 Apr 2024
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Thought the Screech story might be a little much for some, so you all get a second post this morning.

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[โ€“] anon6789 2 points 8 months ago (1 children)

You found the missing piece!

  • Changed facing to staring in title
[โ€“] Olmai 2 points 8 months ago

Another suggestion: comma instead of 'while'